Online Dating Profile Examples for Women

Online Dating Profile Examples for Women

In this article you will learn how to transform your profile writing into writing that will attract the highest quality men online

By NEM Founder, Joshua Pompey

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It’s easy to attract any man online.  But attracting the highest quality men?  That is a whole different story.  With the highest quality men online receiving multiple emails each day, it is absolutely essential to create a profile that stands out from the competition and sparks immediate interest.

The truth is, I’ve been reading profiles for close to a decade, and most women tend to make very similar mistakes that could easily be avoided by following the correct profile writing advice.  Today I am going to highlight some of these mistakes by taking some poorly written online dating profile examples, and transforming them into profiles that quality men will be extremely attracted to.   Let’s begin, shall we?


The Cliche Online Dating Profile Example

“I currently work in marketing for Disney and love my job.”

So what exactly is wrong with the above statement?  For starters, it is a cliche statement that will blend in with the next 100 profiles.  If you want to get noticed online, you have to stand out from the competition and catch a man’s attention.

Secondly, it is a wasted opportunity.  Whatever you write in your profile should always be used to highlight your best qualities.  Unfortunately, this reveals very little about the writer and what she is all about.  Let’s re-write the example above into a profile that will make a quality man take notice…

The New and Improved Online Dating Profile Example

Old:  “I currently work in marketing for Disney and love my job.”

New:  “Most people love the idea of going to Disney World and unleashing their inner child.  I just so happen to live that dream every day as a Disney Marketing Consultant. It may not be fun and games all the time, but between incredible people I work with and the unique nature of each day, I sure can’t complain.  And hey, free Disney tickets sure don’t hurt either!  Care to join me?”

In the revised profile example, the profile writer is no longer just an online dating cliche.  Her personality shines through, she stands out from the competition, and she reveals many attractive personality traits in ways that feel natural, not forced.

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The “needy and negative energy” profile example

“I need a guy who can make me laugh, wants to try new things, doesn’t cause drama, and has goals in life.  If you don’t have a steady job and are not in my desired age range, I’m sorry but please move on to the next profile.”

There is nothing wrong with wanting (or not wanting) the qualities listed above.  But the manner in which this profile is written will send all the wrong signals. This profile example comes across as needy, negative, and creates the impression that the profile writer may have had bad experiences with online dating in the past.

In addition, you will never scare off the men you don’t want by declaring all the qualities you are hoping to avoid.  Most of these men aren’t even reading your profile anyway or simply don’t care.  But you will scare off the all good guys out there by giving off negative energy.

The New and Improved Profile Example:

New:  “If you are driven, down to earth, and love to try new things, we may just be one email away from hitting it off.  If you can keep me laughing on top of that, maybe we should just start planning the second date now?  :)”

This revised example is more or less sending the same overall message, that she wants someone who can make her laugh, has goals, etc., but it does so in a way that is unique, playful, slightly flirtatious, and fun.  Overall, the tone sounds extremely positive.  These are all qualities that men are attracted to.  With online dating, proper word choice and phrasing make all the difference in the world.

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  • Jackie
    Posted at 08:18h, 10 December Reply

    This is some really useful information. God I feel like such an idiot after reading this! LOL

  • Jess
    Posted at 11:26h, 05 January Reply

    I really like the advice but god this online dating stuff is so annoying!!! Are there any good men left out there?!!!!

    • Sammy
      Posted at 09:21h, 23 January Reply


      I have to be honest, I felt that way too at one point. I went on dozens of dates, or at least it felt like that and each one was worst than the last. I swear to God I was ready to switch teams. I don’t know maybe I just got lucky after overhauling some thing on my profile but I made a whole bunch of changes and started getting a much better crop of men. I mean… I was able to go on dates without having my thumb on 911 so progress right!!!!! But I will say this I met a great guy… he literally is the best thing that ever happened to me. Just keep with it things will pan out eventually!!!

      • Ollie
        Posted at 06:37h, 10 February Reply

        Haha, shouldn’t you be charging for that kind of knowledge!

  • Jules
    Posted at 18:24h, 23 January Reply

    How about an article that shows what the real problem is. Online dating sites filled with men who think they could talk to women like they are trash.

  • Dahrann
    Posted at 06:21h, 10 February Reply

    Now we know who the selbisne one is here. Great post!

  • Anonymous
    Posted at 05:44h, 31 March Reply

    Very good blog article.Thanks Again. Fantastic.

  • Coco
    Posted at 11:52h, 31 March Reply

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  • Anthony
    Posted at 19:07h, 13 May Reply

    Very nice article. I certainly appreciate this site. Stick with it!

  • Barbara
    Posted at 02:53h, 20 May Reply

    It’s the little changes that produce the greatest changes.

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